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| Monica's Writing Skills Jumpstart Your Written Communication Skills By Monica Jackson, MBA Adjunct College Professor, Author, Speaker I am an adjunct college professor in Southern California. The goal of this quarterly column is to help readers take the initiative to be responsible for improving written communication skills. This will help students become valuable students and allow instructors to serve students, better. This ultimately produces better employees for the workplace and society. In every course that I teach, I am astonished to discover that basic written communication skills are so deficient in first year college students, second, third, fourth and at the graduate level. Students are graduating from college with substandard writing skills. However, higher learning institutions are not the sole culprit. Some students have developed bad habits, over time, and have become apathetic. Furthermore, professors cannot always deviate from course objectives to address this deficiency. Therefore, students may not improve before graduating from college. In listening to hiring firms, the number one complaint that employers have about recent college graduates is that these new hires cannot compose basic, cohesive sentences. Lacking this important quality, could make the difference between getting a job and keeping the job. According to doctors Ifte Choudhury, Ricardo E. Rocha and Richard Burt, "Without adequate written communication skills, an employee may be passed over for promotion" (Hutchison & Mills, 2003, p. 183). Simply put, a student may get the job, but may not reap the associated rewards and opportunities. The authors state, "By not teaching our students to read critically and to write logically and clearly, we unsuspectingly limit their personal and professional horizons (Bradney & Courbat, 1998). An employee's ability to advance in an organization may be dependent on that person's ability to communicate both verbally and with the written word (Maher, 1990)" (Hutchison & Mills, 2003, p. 183). This is one reason why I am adamant about quality writing skills. I bring errors to students' attention. Students bicker, gripe and resist, but may thank me later. I have observed that some students only aim to succeed in courses that are for their career. I contend that this thought process must change. In March 2009, one student wrote the following comment in an end of term survey for a written communication course, at a major university: This instructor is insane for trying to make students learn something the students do not care about. This is english, people are here for criminal justice, business, health, construction management, and drafting. No one will really car much about English and to have the goal of trying to make students learn English here is ridiculous. This comment may shock some and not stir up any emotion in others. Unfortunately, this student's comment represents how some students feel, think and therefore approach education. By the way, a second-year college student wrote this comment. Somehow, society must bridge the gap and students must learn to approach every course with equal importance. Every successful person has to conform and follow some rules. This does not mean that everyone will write perfectly. It means that every American citizen that matriculates through American learning institutions must possess basic written communication skills to be competitive. Here is another example. In August 2009, the following sentence appeared in a first-year college student's paper: These two chart explain the solution to baby step and problem happen with multiple solution. The student was attempting to introduce a flowchart representing solutions to a given problem and a contingency plan chart. Did you gain this understanding from the sentence? Imagine what would happen if the student presented this to an employer or this appeared as instructions on a product package that targeted consumers. This student is not alone. A student pursing her master's degree wrote, "I had for got ton ..." The student should have written, "I had forgotten..." This was just one of the numerous errors that appeared in this paper. I brought this mistake to the student's attention. She said, "I am not a good writer. Writing is not my strength." She had no interest in improving. The student was one course from earning a master's degree and eventually graduated. These examples are from students who attend California universities, where all high school graduates are required to take the CAHSEE (California High School Exit Exam) before receiving a high school diploma. The test certifies students have demonstrated basic math, reading and writing abilities. How did these students pass? Are students simply being passed through the system? How is America going to compete with other countries, if it continues to produce citizens with substandard communication skills? Now that you are aware that meager written communication skills are widespread, what are you going to do to strengthen your skills? Here are a few suggestions: Ten Tips to Improve Written Communication Skills Purchase a Basic English Reference Guide (6 - 8th grade). Students are taught parts of speech and how to construct proper sentences, assure subjects and verbs agree, construct paragraphs, punctuate properly and more. Keep this guide handy when writing. Invest in a Style Guide. These guides help students to be consistent when writing and to develop a voice, style and tone. Two popular guides are the Associated Press Style Guide and Chicago Style Guide. Write daily. The more you write, the better you become. Practice makes perfect. You will make mistakes along the way, but you will not continue to make the same mistakes. Proofread your papers. Run spell and grammar check. Although, they do not locate every error, they flag some errors. Ask a friend to read your assignments. A second pair of eyes may identify overlooked errors, to correct before submitting to a professor or employer. Avoid common mistakes. Know when to use words, such as: there, their and they're; too, two and to; can not and cannot; know and no. etc. Avoid texting language in written assignments. While technology is great, it negatively affects written communication skills. Each week, students compose sentences in written assignments as follows: "i will tell u bcuz... i will b in class 2...." This is totally acceptable in written assignments. The problem is that students are not recognizing these as mistakes. This has become the norm and a major problem. Own up to mistakes. When you discover mistakes, correct them. If I find typos in emails, even if they are casual in nature, I send a retraction or say "oops ... 'two' should have been 'too,' for example. I need to slow down and review emails, thoroughly, before sending. Also, it sends a message to the recipient, that he or she should do the same. Strive for active voice, instead of passive. Active voice is clear and more direct than passive voice. It is easier to understand and gets to the point. Avoid plagiarism. When researching information and using thoughts that are not your own, give credit where credit is due. See the citations and reference used in this article, for an example. Plagiarism is a serious crime, even if it is unintentional. Because this topic is such an issue, an upcoming issue will address this topic. Reference Hutchison, M. H. & Mills, T.A. (2003, Fall). The Journal of Construction Education. Technical Writing for Construction Science Graduates. Vol. 8, No. 3, p. 183. 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